"Never Be The Same"
Verse 1:
I'm standing on the edge of something
I don't know what it is
But I feel it in my bones
And it's pulling me towards it
Chorus:
And it's never been the same
This world that we're living in
We're not the same as we were
In a different dimension
Verse 2:
Life is full of changes and challenges
Sometimes I feel like I'm drowning
But I hold on tight to hope
And it helps me get through each day
(Chorus) x2
Bridge:
As the sun sets on another day
And the stars come out to play
I feel like I'm in a different world
A place where anything is possible
(Chorus) x1
Outro:
And it's never been the same
This world that we're living in
We're not the same as we were
Forever changed and never the same.
修改建議：
1. “I don't know what it is” - 建議改為“I don't understand what it is”或“I have no idea what it is”，這樣表達更為準確。
2. “And it's pulling me towards it” - “pulling”在這裡不太合適，改為“beckoning”或“calling”更為恰當。
3. “Life is full of changes and challenges” - “full of”過於強烈，改為“brimming over with”，更能表達出生活的變化和挑戰之多。
4. “Sometimes I feel like I'm drowning” - “drowning”這個詞在這裡可能過於強烈，可以改為“sometimes I feel overwhelmed”。
5. “And it helps me get through each day” - 可以將“each day”去掉，這樣更簡潔有力。
6. “a place where anything is possible” - “possible”這個詞過於絕對，可以改為“a place where anything could happen”。
7. “Forever changed and never the same.” - “Forever changed”與整首歌的主題相符合，保留即可。但要注意這裡的表達並不是絕對的，人總是可以有所改變和適應，可以稍作修改為“Changed, but still...never the same.”或者直接刪去“...never the same”。